So I have posted in like forever!! Did you know that as of last Thursday I have been here for a year?? I still can't! Its sorta sad!!!! Well last night I wrote a pretty cool poem or at least I think so. Any criticism would be appreciated!!
"Heartbroken"
How long does it take old wounds to heal?
Why does the pain continue to kill?
It hurt so much when I was betrayed.
It left my heart tangled and frayed.
When finally I thought I’d moved on,
The memories awakened at the sight of the dawn.
I felt confused, afraid, and hurt yet again,
All because of that one man’s sin.
He promises me he’s changed a lot,
Given the burden up to rot.
Yet still my heart continues to ache
From the burden of his awful mistake.
If only I knew a way to let go,
to take down that invisible foe.
A way to allow my wound to heal properly.
Never reopened for him to see
All the pain he’s caused to this day.
Oh how many times I’ve wished that pain away!
He never knew how much I cared,
Never knew the times I was scared.
Now he’s moved on and I’m left all alone
Just me and my feelings he never would have known.
Will he ever realize all that he lost?
Or what a price his mistake cost?
Here is my awesome poem. I think its become my absolute favorite!! Shower me with wonderful comments, please!
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